2000ad submission Page 3 WIP

You need to work on your drawing. Figures and environments. You're throwing everything but the kitchen sink at this page, but that isn't going to distract anybody from that problem. Keep it simple and prioritise the storytelling and the drawing.

I'm not singling you out here, 99.9% of all art submissions to 2000AD that I've seen have had serious problems with drawing. It may seem like a simple thing, but it's hard work to fix and you can't fake it.

Good luck.